Work in Progress Wednesday!

[tjs_whatnot]

Sorry I'm late. I keep getting distracted. Story of my life really.

I have been busy with things, but nothing really WiP Wednesday worthy, what about you? What do you got?

Share your work, then come back to cheer on the others. It only really works if you do both parts.

♥

Comments

[tielan]

Ooh. Sounds like there's some serious bad blood there. Interesting snippet!

One thing: stabbing her between the lungs sounds odd. Is there a reason that she's not stabbing her between the breasts? Or stabbing her in the chest? Or the solar plexus?

[silveradept]

The solar plexus is what she's getting and asking for. That part might get revised later on if I think about it and decide the character knows about it. Having a kickboxer for a sister makes it much more likely.

I wasn't completely sure the audience would know, either, but that's what search engines are for, I guess?