Your friends were right. DaVinci is crap, but easy read crap...so no loss. As to your POV problem...why don't you write more than one version from different POV's and it should become apparent which one really needs to be telling the story. It's worked for me in the past...although usually my characters are pretty bossy and let me know pretty fast who should be talking...
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Date: 2006-07-05 06:12 pm (UTC)