tielan (
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2019-05-16 09:13 am (UTC)
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Ooh. Sounds like there's some serious bad blood there. Interesting snippet!
One thing:
stabbing her between the lungs
sounds odd. Is there a reason that she's not stabbing her between the breasts? Or stabbing her in the chest? Or the solar plexus?
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One thing: stabbing her between the lungs sounds odd. Is there a reason that she's not stabbing her between the breasts? Or stabbing her in the chest? Or the solar plexus?